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JAPOV
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I'm pretty sure this doesn't count as gospel....... Oh well, it is what it is lol :cool:

http://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/player.cfm?type=single&songid=13551499&q=hi&newref=1

no other word can come first
no lie or misperception
like the miracle of birth
the truth can’t change direction
many words never matter
nothing new under the sun
just wailing in the clatter
till the end foretold to come

one word from the beginning
one word a gift so divine
one word spoke of creation
one word spoke the end of time
and it’s time, time, time….. it’s time

committed by principle
a duty to maintain course
no option to surrender
speaking victory foreword
driven by understanding
that silence is for cowards
the battle is deafening
a relentless war of words

it’s the word worth waiting for
the word understood too late
it’s the word that became flesh
the word that reveals our fate

desperate for words to believe
to add solace to the fray
to quiet the confusion
and conclude a darkened day
but peace has been forsaken
and logic has led astray
trade silence for compassion
when there’s nothing left to say

one word from the beginning
one word a gift so divine
one word spoke of creation
one word spoke the end of time
and it’s time, time, time….. it’s time

Last edited on Sun Jul 23rd, 2017 07:47 pm by JAPOV

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I'm not sure it is either, although there is no strict definition. I enjoyed it, nevertheless :)

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ha! well that's all that matters :)

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First of all Tony not just good to read your post but good to hear your style, great song but certain lines has to match with that rock high, remember its a rock song.

Really cool :cool:


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