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" ALL THIS HURTING "
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 Posted: Sun Jun 18th, 2017 07:06 am
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forbidden colours
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(V1)

It's not too late
To let go
How much more
Can you take
Is it worth
Another blow

CHORUS

It doesn't matter
Who you are
All this hurting
Has gone too far
It doesn't matter
Who you are
All this hurting
Has left a scar

(V2)

Dry your eyes
Put on your face
Having to hide
What's been done
To keep up with
His social grace

CHORUS

It doesn't matter
Who you are
All this hurting
Has gone too far
It doesn't matter
Who you are
All this hurting
Has left a scar

BRIDGE


Hiding behind a suit
Canvassing a campaign
To keep your seat
Abusing the parties name

(V3)

When you talk
Be sure to show
The diary of pain
That will explain
The body blows
And acts of shame

CHORUS

It doesn't matter
Who you are
All this hurting
Has gone too far
It doesn't matter
Who you are
All this hurting
Has left a scar

Words : Paul Brookes,2017.2107880.

Last edited on Sat Jun 24th, 2017 06:55 am by forbidden colours

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 Posted: Tue Jun 27th, 2017 01:36 pm
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Verse three is very well written. I like 'The Diary Of Pain'. Everyone will have a slightly different image of it and that's really interesting :)

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 Posted: Tue Jun 27th, 2017 01:58 pm
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PrettyBoyMitch wrote:
Verse three is very well written. I like 'The Diary Of Pain'. Everyone will have a slightly different image of it and that's really interesting :)

Hello

That's the beauty of our craft the way lyric's are interpreted .Thank you for taking the time to pass comment.

Regards
Paul.

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 Posted: Wed Jul 5th, 2017 11:39 pm
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Is this one a comment on current UK politics?
I'm not really getting it, but I'm in Australia and only get a limited view of what's happening over there.

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 Posted: Thu Jul 6th, 2017 09:59 am
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RainyDayMan wrote:
Is this one a comment on current UK politics?
I'm not really getting it, but I'm in Australia and only get a limited view of what's happening over there.


Hi Owen

Domestic violence doesn't only happen to ordinary people .It happens also to people in power who abuse there position ,and should be looked at just the same.The lyric doesn't refer to any political person/party just an idea i had that i thought would make a good lyric.

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