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It never stops hurting
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 Posted: Thu Apr 20th, 2017 07:38 pm
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Seamus
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It never stops hurting

It never stops hurting
when you give all of you
they choose someone else
and your heart breaks in two

all your cards on the table
nothing to hide
you'd opened your heart
with words you'd confide

you did all the running
with hope in your heart
never a notion
that he'd rip it apart

walked out of your life
left nothing but lies
a pocket full of promises
and tears that you cried

You hope against hope
that the nightmares not true
you'll wake in the morning
and he'll be there with you

but reality hits home
so painful and deep
mind full of confusion
can't get to sleep

It never stops hurting
when you give all of you
they choose someone else
and your heart breaks in two


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 Posted: Fri Apr 21st, 2017 01:14 am
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Very nice! I like that first verse in particular. Sums everything up nicely

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 Posted: Fri Apr 21st, 2017 08:38 am
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Thanks for looking friend always appreciated.



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 Posted: Mon Apr 24th, 2017 05:18 pm
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M.P. Shaudd
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Very truthful. I think we've all been there at one time or another.

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 Posted: Mon Jun 19th, 2017 10:54 am
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Looking for a composer to put music to this.



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