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DANCE FOR ME
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 Posted: Fri Feb 17th, 2017 12:12 am
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 Posted: Fri Feb 17th, 2017 12:58 am
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Do you have a recording of this one Robert?



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 Posted: Fri Feb 17th, 2017 01:14 am
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Not really.

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 Posted: Fri Feb 17th, 2017 01:16 am
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I think I'll go home now

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 Posted: Fri Feb 17th, 2017 01:50 am
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Right. I can help you here.
The email address Troy@thesongwritersforum.com is no longer active. I have taken over the day to day admin from Troy (although he is still a regular visitor).

However, you dont need to email your song to anyone.
Our previous method was to load it here on TSF but we're not doing that anymore

If you load it to a free site like Soundcloud, or Soundclick or ReverbNation etc you can post a link to your song here on TSF.
That's our preferred method these days.

There are some instructions on how to post from Soundcloud
here if that helps, but in general it is just posting a link.

I saw an old post with instructions for emailing that I have now deleted.

Private message (PM) me if you get stuck!



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 Posted: Fri Feb 17th, 2017 02:21 am
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anyone have any pizza?

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 Posted: Fri Feb 17th, 2017 04:23 am
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This is really nice! I like the kinda lay back vibe you've got going there.

In the lyric did you mean
WHEN I’M ON THE FLOOR RIGHT NEXT TO YOU rather than
WHAT I’M ON THE FLOOR RIGHT NEXT TO YOU

Otherwise my only suggestion is that the chorus is melodically very close to the verse and you could make that more distinct if you wanted to.

But it's fine just as it is.



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 Posted: Fri Feb 17th, 2017 04:29 am
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sorry, I'm a Baaad typist

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Hey Robert, no link to song :?

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There was a link Dogmax, but Robert has removed it.



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