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 Posted: Wed Nov 23rd, 2016 04:50 pm
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wkamen
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https://soundcloud.com/wkamen/somewhere-final



I drift across a secluded beach.
I feel the sand beneath my feet.
Impressions fading in the sand
from a turning tide.

I catch a fragrance in the air,
i stop to look in wonder
as it captivates my senses
with serenity.

I close my eyes,
and see you on that beach
swaying to the sound of the waves.
A brief vision of all that was  beautiful
is but a memory.

Somewhere

Somewhere where love began
Somewhere where love blossomed

Somewhere only we know

I came across a frail beach pea
once blossoming binding the sand.
Is this the spot our hearts blossomed
binding our love?

Adrift in the shallows
of a changing tide,
time ages, understanding deepens
and beauty reveals in different forms.

Visions of what we shared,
once blowing in with the sea breeze,
now, nothing more than broken shells
scattered in the sand.


Let’s go back to those moments of magic
to talk about it and put the broken pieces
back together to complete our voyage.


Somewhere

Somewhere where love began
Somewhere where love blossomed

Somewhere only we know

Somewhere only we know




Last edited on Thu Nov 24th, 2016 06:00 pm by wkamen



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 Posted: Mon Dec 26th, 2016 10:54 pm
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I love this song! It reminds me of the song "Everywhere" by one of my heroes, Tim McGraw!

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 Posted: Mon Jan 2nd, 2017 03:19 pm
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Thanks jdtaper



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 Posted: Thu Jul 27th, 2017 10:21 pm
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Thanks for all the comments



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 Posted: Fri Jul 28th, 2017 04:33 am
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Lovely laid back feeling in this one. Good match between the lyric and the music. Very nice.

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 Posted: Sat Jul 29th, 2017 02:44 pm
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This is very good are you singing this ? the singer is very good if he's a demo artist could you give me his info please?



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