The Songwriters' Forum - by Songwriters, for Songwriters Home 

Welcome to The Songwriters' Forum - by Songwriters, for Songwriters!
Please log on to view our discussion forum in its entirety.

"Entravu"
 Moderated by: Troy33, RainyDayMan, HankTheTank
New Topic Reply Printer Friendly
 Rate Topic 
AuthorPost
 Posted: Mon May 26th, 2014 11:13 am
  PMQuoteReply
1st Post
KeithPat
Member


Joined: Wed Jun 12th, 2013
Location: Bogalusa, Louisiana USA
Posts: 133
Favorite Artist: Stevie Nicks,
I am a: Songwriter
Status: 
Offline
   "Entravu"

Met you at the club last night

Yeah, you looked so damn tight

Hair  so perfect, looks so right

Oh those lips, " can't I have a bite"

Cute little top and hip hugging jeans

It was the night life in New Orleans

We danced the night away


(C)You gotta see me more, knocking at my door

Start ringing my bell, you ain't gonna tell

The only thing I have to say to you

Entravu little darlin' entravu

Yeah, the only thing to say 

Entravu little darling ... entravu


We got frisky with a little funk

We pounced on a little punk

We popped to the rock

and we rocked to the pop

We juked to a little jive

Then we took a little drive


You gotta see me more, knocking at my door

Start ringing my bell, you ain't gonna tell

The only thing I have to say to you

Entravu little darlin' entravu

Yeah, the only thing to say 

Entravu little darlin' ... entravu


We drove along Lake Pontchartrain

Got in the pull over lane

We took a little swim

Then you clued me in

You had to get rid of a boy

He was just a little toy

You were through with him


(B)You haven't felt like this since you don't know when

You want to see me again and again.

Could I tell you where I live, where I stay

You gonna get straight and come my way


You gotta see me some more

Come knocking at my door

Start ringing my bell

Saying you ain't gonna tell

The only thing I have to say to you

Entravu little darlin' entravu

Yeah,  the only thing to say 

Entravu little darlin'...  entravu

Entravu little darlin'...  entravu


Entravu little darlin'...   entravu

Entravu little darlin'...   entravu


Lyrics by William K. Patterson,
Bogalusa, LA. May 2014.

Last edited on Sat Oct 24th, 2015 06:28 pm by KeithPat



____________________
'A light so bright, to bright to see.

Shining from above the sky is following me.

It's not my time, it just cant be.

But I feel His love so preciously...'
Back To Top 


 Posted: Thu May 29th, 2014 04:37 pm
  PMQuoteReply
2nd Post
chris bowen
Member
 

Joined: Fri Aug 23rd, 2013
Location:  
Posts: 268
Favorite Artist: 
I am a: Songwriter
Status: 
Offline
knocks me around to read it.good job.

Back To Top


 Posted: Fri Sep 26th, 2014 01:08 am
  PMQuoteReply
3rd Post
blueriver girl
Member
 

Joined: Sun Aug 4th, 2013
Location: Goodman, Missouri USA
Posts: 22
Favorite Artist: Keith Whitley,Alabama,Johnny Cash
I am a: Songwriter
Status: 
Offline
Very funky cool! I like it.



____________________
~~Writing doesn't exercise your emotions;it gives others a reason to FEEL.~~
Back To Top 


 Posted: Sat Sep 27th, 2014 09:37 pm
  PMQuoteReply
4th Post
Jim Colyer
Member


Joined: Wed Apr 11th, 2007
Location: Nashville, Tennessee USA
Posts: 1746
Favorite Artist: ABBA
I am a: Songwriter
Status: 
Offline
This one got my attention right away. I crossed Pontchartrain once. 1977 on a Greyhound.



____________________
Annie Bushmeyer CD
http://www.jimcolyer.com
Back To Top


Current time is 04:05 pm

Top



UltraBB 1.172 Copyright © 2007-2016 Data 1 Systems
Page processed in 0.1607 seconds (17% database + 83% PHP). 26 queries executed.