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"My life"
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 Posted: Tue Aug 13th, 2013 01:22 pm
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Andyslyrics
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Hi guys n girls am new here please give me some feedback on my songs


My life

Verse 1
I cant help to think off what I will become.
Successful lyricist our a failed broken bum
Grew up with pen and pad no money I had
No friends no dad such a harsh life isn't it sad

Chorus
What do I have to do for you to come to grips
my dream will be true as a lyricist
Some day maybe not soon our maybe it might
Writing songs daily this is my life.

Verse 2
I made a promise to myself to fix mothers health
Hold on tight soon be alright seeking out our wealth
This is my last chance to show this whole wide world
That I can write songs that make your stomach curl

Chorus
What do I have to do for you to come to grips
my dream will be true as a lyricist
Some day maybe not soon our maybe it might
Writing songs daily this is my life.


Bridge
I just simply couldn't comprehend, what I will be
But il search so deep to reach my destiny
Make good on my promises its gonna be alright
Climbing out this cave i can see the light

Chorus
What do I have to do for you to come to grips
my dream will be true as a lyricist
Some day maybe not soon our maybe it might
Writing songs daily this is my life.



(C) Andrew Moorcroft 2013

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