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airjordan10293 Member
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Them same people that supposed to love me Instead all they wanna do is judge me **** em let em lay That’s all I gota say Fought through my battle on my own Day after day I know I got off path for a little bit But my way of life I became sick of it My fake friendships Time to get rid of it My entire past Time to put a lid on it So many things in my life weren’t right Always asking would I get to see tomorrows sunlight But enough about the past The past doesn’t last Fortuantely for me the future is here at last |
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ADrunkPanda Member 
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The flow of the lyrics seem pretty good, except for some parts (the "Some things in my life..." stanza). When I was rapping this (I cannot rap well btw XD), like I said, some of the verses didn't follow a consistent flow. That's just me, though. Not sure if that's what you're looking for, but that's what I've got. I just love the conviction and determination behind these lyrics. Something I can relate to right now. Look forward to seeing more! |
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