|View single post by hardtwistmusic|
|Posted: Fri Jan 25th, 2013 04:26 pm||
|Angel of Nothing wrote:
So I've had this chorus for the past couple of months but I don't know if it's really any good or not. Here it is let me know what you thinks.
I can't know how you're melody sounds... but for me, the first line lurches a little at "the next."
The cadence seems to me (again without knowing your melody) to be asking for "I won't be A link in the chain
of your self destructive ways."
The melody will dictate.
Aside from that, this is really powerful in my opinion.