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 Posted: Fri Jul 23rd, 2010 03:27 am
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Dusty Demos



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I like it,sounds like the same life my dogs lead!
My only nit,the work/curb abstract rhyme is kind of a stretch for me.
I tried to sing it,but stumbled on those two words.
Good write though.



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