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 Posted: Mon May 17th, 2010 12:41 am
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SundownSam



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Andy, I'm loving it! You're doing so good with this. Where you've made the changes does indeed read smoother. Oh... and how 'bout you just forget what I said about the chorus and sing it as you have it. Sometimes we just have to do what feels right to us. There's actually nothing wrong with the way you have it, I was just saying a few more lines might give it a little added punch. But you've done really well with the lyrics! Now, go show BIAB who's boss! lol  :)



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