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 Posted: Sat May 15th, 2010 12:06 am
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Andy

 

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Ok....now I know. I have since done a little to Verse 2 because it didn't flow for me either when I started looking at it after your observations. I'm rhyming lines two and four this time around and it's difficult to make that happen with the words I've used....I may have to re-evaluate my lines?
I will send you what I have in the music department.....I know it's not very good but I don't know how to fix it without starting over every time I don't like something....at least you will be able to sing along with what I have. Thanks,

Andy

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