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 Posted: Fri Dec 4th, 2009 10:00 pm
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RainyDayMan



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Thanks Sara. Yes I can see that in the context of this song "God damn" becomes a lot more jarring than it would be elsewhere. As Roy said initially, the solution is probably to change it to just "damn" and stretch it over two syllables. No doubt if it were to go anywhere a publisher would insist upon it! Appreciate the feedback :)



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