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 Posted: Thu Dec 3rd, 2009 10:46 am
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Roy Harris



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Very nice piano work indeed.  It adds a lot to it.  I have heard the phrase, "One foot in front of the other" before.  To me, it means just keep one foot in front of the other, walk the straight and narrow, etc.  I would change one line however.  Last line of the third verse, I woule take out "God".  When you put it in front of damn you are cursing the God that you are seeking redemption from.  Maybe that was your intent, I don't know, but I just don't think it would go over in a song, any song. 



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