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 Posted: Thu Dec 3rd, 2009 03:32 am
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I certainly liked it since it reminds me of how my wife plays our old upright piano that is a prominent piece in our living room. I agree some additional rhymes might work, but only if they serve the message well.

I also like the uniqueness of "One foot front", as I am not familiar with the phrase. It adds to the nice flavor of the song. I say it's worth developing for sure. 

Last edited on Thu Dec 3rd, 2009 03:32 am by C2



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