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 Posted: Tue Apr 4th, 2006 10:34 pm
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Mai



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hi Kathy

This Girl's Long Gone" is a good title and you have some great ideas to work with.

I also like "I'm Over me, Getting Over You"

Think about this: (maybe too many lines, but an idea!)

I’m over me, Getting over you, Being over me

Cuz I’m movin’ on,

from your cold heart doin’ me wrong.
Raise a hand and wave goodbye,

as I disappear
I won’t
bother to cry,

as everything is clear
Y
our cheatin’ ways’ll do you in,

and you’ll find yourself left again

This time this girl’s long gone,

happy to be free.

I’m over me, Getting over you, Being over me

 

or it can begin with:

This Girl’s Long Gone

from your cold heart doing me wrong
I’m over me, Getting over you, Being over me

-----etc, your choice

Good Luck

Mai

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