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 Posted: Sat Apr 1st, 2006 11:59 am
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Crystal Lynn



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Kathy....I really love the first verse!!!!  I love all the little details..as I read it, my mind started this picture...good storytelling here...I agree the chorus needs more work...there's a great hook in there..."This Girls Long Gone" ....I really think you've got something here...keep working on it!!



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