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 Posted: Sat Apr 1st, 2006 12:59 pm
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Crystal Lynn

Joined: Mon Oct 10th, 2005
Location: Kentucky USA
Posts: 1170
Kathy....I really love the first verse!!!!  I love all the little I read it, my mind started this picture...good storytelling here...I agree the chorus needs more work...there's a great hook in there..."This Girls Long Gone" ....I really think you've got something here...keep working on it!!


The supreme happiness of life is the conviction of being loved for yourself, or, more correctly, being loved in spite of yourself.

-Victor Hugo
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