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|Posted: Sun Nov 2nd, 2008 12:51 pm||
Miss Frances, good to see you posting another one! You were concerned about your song structure a short while back, but I must say, this is looking very good! I never have gotten those books we talked about, but I do want to get them. Do you feel they have helped you in the way of song structure?
Thank you for the comments. I do appreciate the time you gave to respond.
Yes, I did buy several good books, and I am doing research on some of the
basics, as time permits. The storyline, of beginning, middle,and the end. The
gender, for this song is a female. Her situation gets resolved, by kickin' his
butt out..the slammin' door..lol I Tried to use my hookline, as many times
as I could...(to drive home the title).. You are right about the suggestion
to label the verses. I didn't do this because, the song was not finished yet.
My thoughts on the song structure, would not be the same as other great
songwriters. I decided to go ahead and post, to protect my Hook/Storyline.
I do share some, but I wanted to take this one off the grazing market..lol
I hoped, that a good songwriter, would consider a 50/50 co-write.
Have a Blessed Day,
Last edited on Sun Nov 2nd, 2008 01:57 pm by Frances Williams