View single post by SundownSam
 Posted: Sun Nov 2nd, 2008 03:31 am
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Joined: Thu Jul 24th, 2008
Location: Ellenwood , Georgia USA
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Miss Frances, good to see you posting another one!  You were concerned about your song structure a short while back, but I must say, this is looking very good!  I never have gotten those books we talked about, but I do want to get them. Do you feel they have helped you in the way of song structure?  

Just one little thing I'd like to suggest, Miss Frances.  It would be better for the readers if you were to define your verses and choruses.  Like Verse I and Verse II and so forth... and then do the same with the chorus, it makes it a lot easier to read and figure out whats-what when you're reading it.  Just a minor little detail actually, but it does help.  Looking good lady!   

First you write it with your heart - then you re-write it with your head

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