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 Posted: Sat Aug 23rd, 2008 12:30 am
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RainyDayMan



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Another alternative might be:

with tears in your eyes
you're tearing holes in me
more to even up the syllables.

Also with this line
looked for knowledge wrote in books  

to give it 3 syllables in the second half similar to the lines above. I know wrote isnt gramatically correct but it should sing alright.



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