|View single post by RainyDayMan|
|Posted: Sat Aug 23rd, 2008 12:30 am||
|Another alternative might be:
with tears in your eyes
you're tearing holes in me
more to even up the syllables.
Also with this line
looked for knowledge wrote in books
to give it 3 syllables in the second half similar to the lines above. I know wrote isnt gramatically correct but it should sing alright.