|View single post by SongWriter2947|
|Posted: Sun Apr 27th, 2008 10:17 pm||
I'm with Vlad on this...the song sounds fun as is and as far as an ending you could have a repeating chorus. Starting out with a chorus is cool too! Doesn't seem like you hear them starting out with a Chorus much anymore...might be a good time to bring it back.
"Race'd a chevelle down on Griffin road,
snapped a belt and had to have it towed.
Talk was cheap but the action was fun,
and if we fought we didn't have no guns"