View single post by SongWriter2947
 Posted: Sun Apr 27th, 2008 10:17 pm
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Joined: Mon Dec 18th, 2006
Location: Casselberry , Florida USA
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I'm with Vlad on this...the song sounds fun as is and as far as an ending you could have  a repeating chorus. Starting out with a chorus is cool too! Doesn't seem like you hear them starting out with a Chorus much anymore...might be a good time to bring it back.


"Race'd a chevelle down on Griffin road,
snapped a belt and had to have it towed.
Talk was cheap but the action was fun,
and if we fought we didn't have no guns"
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