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| Posted: Sun Apr 27th, 2008 06:32 pm |
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Those lines or something like that would work Tricia, I'm wondering if it's ok that the song never really goes anywhere. I'm not sure if I'm saying this right, but it never goes beyond the idea of him telling her what he wants to do, and what will happen if they go. Do you think that should be included, or is it fine the way it is? It's fun to sing, I'm just not sure what else needs to be included. It sings out in about 1 minute 30 seconds now.
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