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 Posted: Fri Jan 22nd, 2021 03:19 am
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Andrea

 

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This is just my opinion, but I think the chorus would be better with a hook that repeats. For me, I find 'The Beckham County Line' or 'At the Beckham County Line' intriguing. A good hook and repetition in the chorus is very important.

It might be helpful to hear from some other members. Overall, this is looking pretty good. I think you have a really interesting story :)



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