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 Posted: Tue Jan 19th, 2021 01:44 am
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derrickhand300



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Well its beautiful and my heartfelt sympathy for what you are enduring- I wish you peace.

I always try to preface every comment with "Im New" so if I say something ignorant I am hoping for forgiveness

Recently I wrote a song about a mother and small boy passing- I always bring a song here before calling it finished because the thought that goes into feedback is so awesome. The consensus seems to be just keep the deaths at 1 because two was harder to understand I realized then I needed 1 more short verse to explain it- so when I "read" your song I want to understand as much as possible like in the explanation you gave above

Again- my sympathy

Last edited on Tue Jan 19th, 2021 01:45 am by derrickhand300



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