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 Posted: Tue Dec 29th, 2020 03:03 am
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Hey there! When I read through this the first few times I was a little confused by the title as well, thinking that he still wanted her. It seems that you are writing by title here and really want to use that twist on the common phrase. So, just an idea, you could change the title of this piece to be a bit less misleading and then write another song with this title more around the lines of what rainy day man said. It could be like the girl is playing hard to get and that is really getting the guy's attention if you know what I mean. Just a thought.



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