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 Posted: Mon Dec 14th, 2020 04:13 pm
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JustAnotherDreamer

 

Joined: Mon Dec 14th, 2020
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I agree with Andrea’s thoughts. Great start and I was able to visualize it pretty well, which is cool! But I feel like the last two verses could be tweaked a bit to move the story....

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