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 Posted: Fri Dec 11th, 2020 12:54 pm
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BeatlesFan64 wrote:
Hm...I agree with Charles, I think four verses before a single chorus is really pushing it. I think you could have one iteration of the chorus after verse 2 and another after verse 4. Other than that, I thought this was a really witty and funny lyric. You definitely turned the "woe is me" country trope on its head with this one. Personally, I love the title, it perfectly sets the tone for the lyrics. You know going in that this isn't going to be just another sad song. Great work!

A great idea about that 2nd chorus. I'm going to incorporate it.

"I'm not sure if my heart is in my music - or my music is in my heart!"
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