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 Posted: Wed Dec 9th, 2020 08:08 pm
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RainyDayMan



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Works for me, BRD!

Got a real country vibe going with words like "gussied up" in there. You've painted a vivid picture, and given it a lot of atmosphere and energy.

The chorus feels particularly strong. I fall into a natural rhythm there.

You might consider:
put my boot imprint in some sawdust > stamp my bootprints in some sawdust



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