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 Posted: Wed Dec 2nd, 2020 12:45 am
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BeatlesFan64



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 Hi Sensus, I'm sure you've moved on to bigger and better things by now haha. I just wanted to let you know that this is a really good first lyric. There are some rough spots, which others already pointed out, but overall it was good, I really liked your chorus. Well done overall ☺



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