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 Posted: Mon Nov 30th, 2020 11:42 am
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echo insider

Joined: Sun Nov 29th, 2020
Location: Yarm, United Kingdom
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Very emotional song touching on pain, helplessness, despair earnestly.
Rainydayman brought up a narrative concern with the line  -  Closed my eyes laid in our bed Saw your ghost come to me
Pain and regret is all I see
Every memory
i understand that it is when he closes his eyes he goes back in his mind to when he was in bed.
the line could be when i close my eyes, i'm laid in our bedyour ghost comes to mepain and regrets all I see
anyway, just wanted to give honest thoughtful feedback and hope I conveyed this reasonably. Cheers

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