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 Posted: Sun Nov 29th, 2020 07:50 pm
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BeatlesFan64



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I agree with RDM that verses 1 and 2 are sort of at odds with each other about whether this is still his home or not. Personally, I think verse 2 is stronger. I like your imagery of her ghost coming towards him with all the regret and pain of the past. I felt it as the narrator being trapped in a house that no longer feels like a home, that is filled with painful memories in every corner. And in that sense maybe you could tweak the first verse. But those are just my thoughts. It's a great song regardless.

Also since you mentioned it in the description, I think it works best with her dying personally, and that's how I read it.

Last edited on Sun Nov 29th, 2020 07:52 pm by BeatlesFan64



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