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 Posted: Sat Nov 28th, 2020 10:32 pm
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RainyDayMan



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This is great! Lovely guitar work, and you've captured that emotional feel in the music.

The lyric fits quite smoothly against the music - couldn't tell just from the lyric by itself, but it works very well.

And the pause before "when forever ends" works like magic.

If this is your first song, then you have talent!
Is this you singing and playing too?

Good stuff!



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