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 Posted: Thu Nov 26th, 2020 09:52 pm
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derrickhand300



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Thank you!
After posting here I actually changed the area you said to 'We swore our love FOREVER- Man how my heart raced!"

I really felt it needed to show that it was FOREVER for both of us..to make it work.

I like your idea and will work with it and appreciate it!

I will have to study where it was moved to- Ive never wrote a song and dont even understand proper structure-this is just something I sounded out in my head so i appreciate the help

Thank you again



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