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 Posted: Wed Nov 25th, 2020 09:50 pm
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SongWriterJoe



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Love this! Two slightly rough spots:

"Texts I can block but not
The memories" (Not sure how to balance this with the meter you set.. hmmm. Maybe take out "the"??)

I can't block those memories -> "Can't block those memories" (cleans up the meter)

SWJ



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