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 Posted: Sun Nov 22nd, 2020 01:54 am
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cmaja



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Hey, SW Joe... I like all the stanzas and you have some good reviews to review. My concern is the structure. Four verses before you hit the chorus? Good thing you gotta a solid chorus. What happens after the ‘musical interlude?’ Perhaps repeat verse 4 and the chorus. An interlude suggests more lyrical stanzas. I’m confused. But a good start with great stanzas to work with. Thanks for sharing.

Charles



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