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 Posted: Thu Nov 12th, 2020 09:48 pm
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RainyDayMan



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Just my two cents, but I'd go for something more poetic here. I think a horror theme allows you to be more dramatic rather than conversational in style.

So:
Out from the darkness..
Shriek of the night bird's call..
Something of the shadows..
Sliding across the the wall

I think you've got your mood sorted, but still looking for your hook to kind of anchor it.



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