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 Posted: Sun Oct 11th, 2020 02:46 pm
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M.P. Dudash



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John, this is very good. I can hear it. I prefer v1 to be like the original post, but that’s me. I could see a slight change to lines 5-8 in v1 to combine some of the ideas. Overall really good!



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