|View single post by Andrea|
|Posted: Mon Sep 28th, 2020 12:04 am||
|M.P., I think this is fun. My favorite part is the chorus.
I think these last 2 verses are the weaker parts.
I could try out another >>- maybe taste me another
Bring her home for a night
If she’s too hot to handle >- hot doesn't work for beer, at least at the point when you drink it. I thought maybe spicy
I can put her on ice - If you changed the line above somehow different, then there are many words that rhyme with night.
I’ll bring her home just in case
Or only because
I’m craving the feelings
I can’t get rid of >>- personally this verse just falls short for me.
I think this is worth working on.