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 Posted: Sun Sep 27th, 2020 08:23 am
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RainyDayMan



Joined: Thu May 17th, 2007
Location: Stratford, Australia
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My fav lines:
I’ve seen my share of heartache
Hangovers too
There’s no use denying
They were both caused by you


You might try:
If only they brewed up love > If they only brewed up love
depending on how you want the rhythm to go there.

"Trying out another" feels a little cold to me, but that could just be me!



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