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|Posted: Thu Sep 24th, 2020 10:40 am||
|Very nice song and lyrics....
but a strange feeling...is this Japov??? What's wrong?
then I realized, there is no guitar at all!!
Congratulation to resist to the temptation and producing a tune without guitar...I guess I won't never be able
Maybe the chorus can benefit for a second chord-tonal change to add variety,
what about to begin the second part of the chorus with C major?
brevity, the expectation
the ardency, the realization
a life of learning far behind the curve
a sense of knowing,
all the swimmers
quit without a
then continues normally
blue, saffron, and fuchsia
I have a melody in my head for these new chords, if you like the idea I will record it a rough version
Last edited on Fri Sep 25th, 2020 08:16 pm by Nothingless
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