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 Posted: Thu Sep 24th, 2020 10:40 am
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Nothingless



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Very nice song and lyrics....
but a strange feeling...is this Japov??? What's wrong?

then I realized, there is no guitar at all!!:)

Congratulation to resist to the temptation and producing a tune without guitar...I guess I won't never be able

Maybe the chorus can benefit for a second chord-tonal change to add variety,
what about to begin the second part of the chorus with C major?

brevity, the expectation
the ardency, the realization
a life of learning far behind the curve
C
a sense of knowing,
C/B
then exploding
Bbmaj7b5
un-controlling,
Asus4
so annoying
F
all the swimmers
D7
quit without a
Am
word

then continues normally
Bmaj7......
blue, saffron, and fuchsia

I have a melody in my head for these new chords, if you like the idea I will record it a rough version

Last edited on Fri Sep 25th, 2020 08:16 pm by Nothingless



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