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 Posted: Mon Sep 21st, 2020 11:21 pm
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RainbowKeeper



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Hey,
Here is another oldie of mine. Reworked it today and would like to read some feedback on it. I dunno but atm I’m more active then creative but I know anything should have its time and place. So I guess I’ll soon have (new) fresh ideas and the time and space to write them down.
Hope you are all good!
RK

An idea of winter

Summer is now over A‘
The sun dried out my crown
Cold air is rising up
Fresh rain keeps falling down
Soon I’ll have to let go
Leaves are changing slowly
Mist will hide their ashes
While strong winds will bend me

An idea of winter B
The dark will soon bury the light
An idea of winter
My urge for peace becomes profound
An idea of winter
The dark will soon bury the light
Virgin snow on frozen ground
I’ll rest inside myself
Without sorrows, without sound

Yellow, red and some brown. A+
Yes I gave all I could
Tried so hard to stand tall
To be strong, to be good
Shades are growing taller
Branches almost empty
Days becoming shorter
Last leaves are breaking free

My cycle is completed C
I’ll regain strength through the dark times
My cycle is completed
I’m growing taller, I’m getting old
My cycle is completed
I’ll regain my strength through the dark times
And the cold

Summer is now over A*
The sun dried out my crown
Cold air is rising up
Fresh rain keeps falling down

© by Ian P.
20.11.12/reworked: 22.09.20
W by Ian P.
for: VB



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