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 Posted: Sat Sep 12th, 2020 09:34 pm
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Billy_Lunch_Money



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To be honest I'm quite lucky I was able to post this at all. Over the lockdown my computer kept playing up and I lost a load of files and thought this had gone forever. I came across it in the notes section of my email the day before I posted and I guess it's been sitting there for roughly 6 months. Today I sat down with a guitar to see if I could recalled the chords and that came back to me quite quickly, but I don't think this was my final version. I'm sure did do some stuff to tighten up the verses a little already. But doesn't seem to be reflected in this set of lyrics. So guess these maybe a older verse. Heck those verses need clamping down and lock in something chronic and get around to it once the kids are backat school full time.

Andrea, this might be a little selfish but I do think this one's ME, ME ME song and whoever's singing really needs to belt it out. I like this line "This seems to be our creed" have you got any more sugestions like it?


For now, I've reposted a slightly edited version to reflect both yours and RDM's suggestions but no further and everybody who comes across can see the changes and how it's evevolved.


Born

You fashioned a new life for me,
but didn't even ask me.
What's wrong with the old one,
this is treachery
All I wanted, all I needed,
Was peace and tranquillity.

Born on a wing and a prayer
You think you're too good for me
Born without a singular care.
Baby, You're too blind to see.

You take the high road while I'll take the low,
Someday I know we'll meet.
If I were to take your road I know my feet they will bleed.
Everything you wanted and all you ever needed is no longer here in me.

Born on a wing and a prayer
You think you're too good for me
Born without a singular care.
Baby, You're too blind to see

Oh you've blackened, the sky for me, and I can no longer see.
If you take me to a higher ground, I know my ears will bleed.
I never wanted, I never needed you here with me.

I'm gone , I'm gone
I'm gone, I'm gone I'm gone, I'm gone

Born on a wing and a prayer (I'm Gone)
You think you're too good for me (I'm Gone)
Born without a singular care. (I'm Gone)
You think you're so good for me (I'm Gone)
Born of original Sin (I'm Gone)
Baby, You're too blind to see. (I'm Gone)

© by Oz C. 02.02.2020



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