|View single post by RainyDayMan|
|Posted: Sat Sep 12th, 2020 02:49 am||
|Bitterness and anger coming through loud and clear - and conveying emotion is always a good thing.
In v2 I would try to avoid using sure and surely on consecutive lines. You might consider swapping sure > know :
You take the high road while I'll take the low, Someday I know we'll meet.
to get the internal rhyme on low/know.
Seems like this will be one to enjoy when you're in a particular mood.