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 Posted: Wed Sep 2nd, 2020 06:51 pm
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RainbowKeeper wrote:
Thanx Andrea!
I really wanted to get your feedback on this one. Thanks a lot!
This line including the „final answer“ should give the connection to the lines before. The final answer you will get...is:
Through you I won’t be forgotten.
But please, let your mind find some peace
Unwritten is your own future
So much grief you need to release....if you don’t know how to go on.

Merci
RK


Sorry, this line just doesn't work for me. I can imagine what you are saying, but it doesn't feel clear. Just my honest thought.

Maybe it is just me. Hopefully more members will leave some thoughts and feedback.

Not sure why this isn't in the lyrics lounge? It is pretty tight :)



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