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 Posted: Wed Aug 19th, 2020 07:11 am
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cmaja



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This is quite good, JD. It sing pretty smooth and is relatable. I like it! V1, Line 2: Now there’s nothing you want to by but cry, doesn’t sound right. Did you mean: Now there’s nothing you wanna do but cry? The rest is fine. Good job!

Charles



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