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|Posted: Mon Aug 3rd, 2020 06:55 pm||
"She's got bounce" works. The song feels full of energy, and fairly light-hearted and that works too.
Thanks, RD Man for your review and suggestions.
V1, L2 is confusing. Alight is the wrong word. I mean light up.
Chorus, L2: that’s the second comment about it. I’ll change it.
Chorus, L4: I originally had ‘it’ instead of ‘love’ but I didn’t want the listener’s mind to wander, since love is the focus and ‘it’ is subject to interpretation. Whether it’s crass or not is subjective.
Always appreciate your reviews.
Last edited on Mon Aug 3rd, 2020 06:59 pm by cmaja
All songs are from God. Those that are not, aren’t songs at all.