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 Posted: Mon Aug 3rd, 2020 10:05 am
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RainyDayMan



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"She's got bounce" works. The song feels full of energy, and fairly light-hearted and that works too.

Just repeating things here really:
V1 L2 is confusing
Chorus L2 feels a bit too comedic
Chorus L4 comes across as crass to me, maybe ‘speshly where it counts

But overall there's a lot there to like, with just a few minor points, and as always, those are your choices to make.



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