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 Posted: Sun Aug 2nd, 2020 11:11 pm
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cmaja



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MASempine wrote:
I like it. Reminds me of the Carpenters “close to You”. So I too think it’s pop

V1 line 2 seems wrong grammatically but if it sings right leave it like it is. Might be what the song is tempered for. That line I mesn


Hi, MAS... Yea, it could be pop if the music fits. “Close To You” would be a good comparison —an almost angelic person. Sometimes lyrics are hard to place in a genre. They’re so dependent on the music.

V1, line 2 seems okay to me. I can be a scofflaw sometimes when I write lyrics, being more concerned with how it sings rather than grammar. Just don’t take me to court... Haha!

Charles



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