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 Posted: Sun Aug 2nd, 2020 11:11 pm
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MASempine wrote:
I like it. Reminds me of the Carpenters “close to You”. So I too think it’s pop

V1 line 2 seems wrong grammatically but if it sings right leave it like it is. Might be what the song is tempered for. That line I mesn

Hi, MAS... Yea, it could be pop if the music fits. “Close To You” would be a good comparison —an almost angelic person. Sometimes lyrics are hard to place in a genre. They’re so dependent on the music.

V1, line 2 seems okay to me. I can be a scofflaw sometimes when I write lyrics, being more concerned with how it sings rather than grammar. Just don’t take me to court... Haha!


All songs are from God. Those that are not, aren’t songs at all.
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