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 Posted: Sat Jul 18th, 2020 05:53 pm
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cmaja



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This is nice, MAS... Simple AAA format. And it’s sweet! You could add a coda though:

I dream of her now and then
Dreams that have a loving flow
Her smile shine through in the end
As if she saying, “don’t go”

Charles

Last edited on Sat Jul 18th, 2020 05:53 pm by cmaja



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