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 Posted: Tue Jul 14th, 2020 01:17 am
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MASempine



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These lines BELOW are close enough to perfect for me until the word “for”
I’d finish that line with “but I am a man”

I think you need to keep the chorus unchanged. None of the other versions are as good. Rewrite some to keep the chorus the same throughout. IMO

Oh I've seen some hard times and trials in my life.
And lived through some heartaches and sorrows and strife..
I've travelled though darkness.. where evil resides..
But I'm doing the best that I can.

The best that I can Lord.. the best that I can.
The best that I can Lord.. the best that I can.
I know I'm not perfect for I'm but a man..
Whos doing the best that he can.



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